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- These images arefrom primary sources that compare and contrast the speeches of President Ronald Reagan and the diction of the literary western heroes.
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I think that you have a very interesting topic, and have done a good job in establishing a strong argument. You offer strong evidence in the body of your paper, and your conclusion links everything together very nicely I think.
The one thing that I would definitly try to do is add some visuals to your paper. Even if its only a couple pictures comparing The Virginian to Reagan, I think it would make the paper much more clear. It would give the reader something to go by and make the correlations without trying to imagine it. The only other thing that I would think about would be the introduction. You mention Reagan in your thesis, but you don't say anything about his campaign in it. If you were to outline the political implications of Reagan's use of imagery in your thesis, it may build for a stronger thesis. In all, I think the paper is well done and you can tell that you have put a great deal of time in to your argument.
Posted by: William Ewald | May 02, 2006 at 06:45 AM